Rice vs. Bread: Which is Better for Breakfast?
- Comparing the advantages and disadvantages of rice and bread for breakfast.
- Rice keeps you feeling full longer than bread, making it a better choice for an office worker.
- While bread is easier to prepare, rice provides more sustained energy.
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自分で「コメとパン」についての英文を作成してみましのたで、長文で面倒くさいかもしれませんが、英語に詳しい方がいらっしゃいましたら添削をお願い致します。 英文で変な部分がございましたら、バシバシご指摘下さい。 Some people eat rice, the others eat bread in the morning. It often compares rice and bread. But it’s very difficult to compare rice and bread, because both rice and bread have some advantages and disadvantage. For my part, I think that rice is superior to bread. Because rice keeps you going longer than bread, when I eat rice in the morning, stomach has been full by noon. On the other hand, when I eat bread, I’m hungry about ten o’clock. However, bread has advantage. Bread is easy to set the table for breakfast. I just bake breakfast and can eat to place the butter on bread. But I have to wash into rice cooker. In the case of rice, because I have to prepare for a side dish, I take time. In this case, both rice and bread have some advantages and disadvantage. But, I’m sure that rice is superior to bread for an office worker to work from morning, because rice keeps you going longer than bread.
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長い文章ですし、ネイティブでもないので、ぜんぶ直せるとは思いませんが、 気づいたところだけ指摘させていただきますね。 ・the others → others この場合は、「・・・の人もいれば、・・・の人もいる」という意味なので、 the はいりません。 ・2番目の文、it が何を指すか不明。しかも、次の文でまたcompare rice and bread と同じ言い回しを使っているので、くどい感じがするかも・・・。 それに、比較はとても難しいといいつつ、すぐ次の文で「自分は米の方が優れて いると思う」というのも、「あれっ？」て感じがしました。アドバンテージと ディスアドバンテージがあるというなら、まずそれを書いてしまって、その後、 「Therefore（したがって）」結論はこうだ、という書き方のほうが自然では ないでしょうか。 ・For my part はいりません。 ・stomach has been full by noon はおかしいですね。そもそもby noon だと、「正午までに」という感じになります。「・・・まで」だったら、until を使います。それに、完了形も変な感じがします。これは特定の日の話ではなくて、 一般的に「朝、ご飯を食べたら、昼までお腹がすかない」といっているのですよね？ 私だったら、If I have a bowl of rice for breakfast, I won't feel hungry until noon. とすると思います。 ・I'm hungry about ten o'clock. も微妙だと思います。am hungry という お腹がすいている状態を指すので、「10時頃にはお腹がすく」というのであれば、 I will become hungry again before 10 o'clock. とする方が、意味が はっきりすると思います。 ・そのあとBread is easy...I take time. の数行は、かなりメチャクチャです ので（すみません・・・）全面的に書き直した方がよいと思いますよ。 ・In this case はおかしいです。このように、といいたいのであれば、Thus を 使うとか、まとめたいのであれば要するに （To sum up など）を使うとか、変えた 方がよいと思います。 ・あと、superior という単語を使っているのも違和感がありますね。betterでいい んじゃないでしょうか。この文で言っているのは、ご飯がパンより絶対的に優れている ということではなく、オフィス労働者の生活スタイルにはご飯の方が合っているという ことなんですよね？ とりあえず、一番気になった部分だけ書きました。 少しでもご参考になれば幸いです。
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In this sense,rice does much better.It contains far less fat than bread, and white rice contains less than one-tenth of the fat in both breads.Protein is a substance our body needs in order to grow and remBesides the mineral above, whole-grain foods have a higher amount of magnesium in brown rice is seven times as much as that in white rice.Whole-wheat bread contains more than three times the amount of it than in white breads.There is also a largeain healty.Both kinds of bread have around four to five times as much protein as both kinds of rice have.
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Besides the mineral above, whole-grain foods have a higher amount of fiber than refined grain foods. These foods that contain a lot of fiber take longer to digest, which keeps you feeling full longer. Additionally, the dietary fiber in whole-grain foods protects you against high blood cholesterol.It may also reduce our risk of certain types of cancer. Next let's look at Table 1 from another view.Rice and bread can be compared.There is quite a difference in the calorie count between rice and bread.A calorie is the main unit of energy that food will produce.Bread has more calories than rice.Carbohydrates provide our body with heat and energy.It is contained more in bread. Fat plays a vital role in maintaining healthy skin and hair, and body temperature.However, some kinds of fat are not good because they raise our cholesterol level and increase our risk of heart disease.
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