Should Japan Open its Doors to Foreign Workers?
- Japan should carefully consider the question of opening its doors to foreign workers
- While many countries are open to foreign workers, Japan should approach this issue cautiously
- The potential benefits of allowing foreign workers must be evaluated against the potential cultural conflicts and employment challenges
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TOPIC:Japan should open its doors to foreign workers. I don't agree with this opinion.Many countries,say the US and Germany, are relatively open to foreign workers.Such countries insist that Japan should loosen limitation of influx of foreign workers.Certainly,they contribute to lower labor cost.However,there are many problems,such as conflicts of cultures and employment of foreigners. For example in Germany,many people came from other countries,mainly from turkey,to compensate Germany's lack of labor after the world war 2.However,there found conflicts of cultures.Many crimes happend.Besides,in early 1990s,it became difficult for Germans to get job.Foreign workers were regarded as nuisanses. In fact,there is no country that does not have any problems with foreign workers. Therefore,I don't think Japan should open its doors freely to foreign workers. 突っ込みどころ満載ですが…（若者がやりたがらない福祉の仕事なら雇用の点で衝突せずにすみますし）限界です。英語力、英作文力のなさに驚きました(〒_〒)
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英作文力はしっかりあると思いますよ。複数とか、同じ言葉の繰り返しとかがちょっと多すぎるだけで。 それよか今の時代、ちょっと言い間違えると「人種差別だ」と言われてしまうので（外国人はいつも犯罪を起こすとか）ちょっと気をつけて書き換えましたが、おせっかいだったでしょうか・・・ I don't quite agree with the suggestion. Many countries such as US and Germany are relatively open to foreign workers, and they insist that Japan should be too. However what's happened in Germany; after the World War II the country started to welcome immigrants, mainly from Turkey, to boost the labour. Since then it's struggled to accept the cultural differences, crime rates have dramatically increased. Since the early 1990s it's become harder for Germans themselves to get a job. And now, no wonder many regard the foreign workers as a 'nuisance'. In fact I don't think there's any country that does not have problems with foreign workers and, I think it's all to do with the conflict of cultures - we must accept, yet it's very hard to integrate. For that reason, I think Japan should strictly keep controlling the number of foreign workers.
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英語としての 添削なのか 内容についての 添削なのか知らないが 内容を見ると ドイツでは問題が起こっているから 日本は・・・ という筋だが 日本とドイツは 国民性も含め事情が違う の一言で 終わってしまう展開だ。 USA についてもなぜ 名前を挙げたかわからない。
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