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英作文の添削をよろしくお願いします。 私たち日本人は知人に対してはとても親切だが、見知らぬ人には非常に冷たいと言われている。もしこれが本当なら、こんな習慣はできるだけ早く直さなくてはならない。 We Japanese are very kind to an acquaintance but it is said that we are very cold to a stranger.If this is true,we have to get rid of this habit as soon as possible. よろしくお願いします。
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文法的にはまったく問題のない文章に見えます。 もう少し自然に書くならば、 We Japanese are said to be kind to acquaintances, but very cold to strangers. If this is true, we have to rid ourselves of this tendency as soon as possible. 「it is said that」を最初に持ってきたほうがいいと思います。そうでないと、「見知らぬ人には冷たい」と言われている、でも「知人に対してはとても親切」は言われていない/常識のようになってしまいます。 Ａｎ ａｃｑｕａｉｎｔａｎｃｅやＡ ｓｔｒａｎｇｅｒと単数でいうより、複数のほうが自然に聞こえます。 ＨａｂｉｔよりＴｅｎｄｅｎｃｙ（傾向）のほうが適している単語だと思います。
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「と言われている」の部分は、「見知らぬ人には非常に冷たい」にだけかかれば良いのでしょうか？ 「私たち日本人は知人に対してはとても親切だ」までかける必要はないのですね？ （作られた英文がそうなっています） また、「知人に対してはとても親切だが、見知らぬ人には非常に冷たい」というのは、習慣なのでしょうか？ 以上２点が気になりました。 ついでに言えば、「見知らぬ人には非常に冷たい」というのは私はまったくそうは思いません。
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