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27.彼は絶対に少なくとも30分前には家に帰ってくるはずよ。だって列車は5時に着く予定だし、駅から家までバスでわずか5分のところだから。 30 minutes at least ago, he should come back to a house absolutely. Since a だって train is due to reach at 5:00 and it is the place of only 5 minutes by bus from a station to a house. 28.20世紀最大の発明の一つは、車であることに間違いはない。私達の生活に及ぼした影響は甚大なものがある。多くの人にとって車のない生活など考えられないであろう。 影響＝effect There is no mistake in one of the invention greatest in the 20th century being a car. A serious thing has the influence affected our life. The life which does not have a car for many people will not be considered.
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◆第一文 （１）帰宅予定から３０分を過ぎても帰ってこない、という意味でしょう？ であれば、should have + 過去分詞 （～するはずなのに）を使います。 （もし、その意味でないとしたら、何の３０分前なのか、分かりませんね。） （２）at least は修飾する語の前に置く。 （３）家に帰るは come back to a house ではなく come (back) home です。 （４）直訳しすぎです。「わずか５分のところ」は、所要時間の意味でしょう？ 動詞の take を使いましょう。 He should have come home at least 30 minutes ago, because the train is supposed to arrive at 5 and it takes only five minutes by bus from the station. ◆第二文 （１）There is no mistake は不可。日本語の「間違いない」とは意味が違う。 （２）one of のあとは複数形。 （３）「甚大なものがある」＝「甚大だ」 「もの」をすぐ直訳しないこと。 （４）～のない生活→～なしで生活すること There is no doubt that one of the greatest inventions (which are) made in the 20th century is a car. Its effect on our life is enormous. It is impossible for many people to live without a car （または do without a car).
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Although the reading section claimed that it is possible to evaluate people’s intelligence by simply taking IQ test, the lecture said that human intelligence is too complex to evaluate. First, human intelligence is multiple. There are a variety of intelligence exist in the human world. For example, someone has linguistic intelligence and the other people have mathematical intelligence. Second, all human intelligence are not related each other. As I mentioned, a linguistic intelligence and a mathematical intelligence is totally different type of intelligence. So, it can’t evaluate people by just simple test such as IQ test. In addition, the balance of intelligence is not the same. For example, someone has a high score of IQ test, however, it is not simply connected with mathematical skill. ところでHumana intelligence って可算名詞なんですか？ a linguistic intelligence かlinguistic intelligenceどっちですか？
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