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英語の自己紹介~本当に困っています

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>I have been working for (市町村) city (学校名)elementary school. as a teacher for 4 years. →I've been working at (学校名) in (市町村名) as ateacher for 4 years. >Also I like sports and I think I'm pretty good at Japanese dance, JUDO and KARATE. →also は不要だと思います。自分のことに I thinkはちょっと不自然ではないでしょうか?たとえばスポーツが好きで、柔道、空手の経験があって、何年経験があるとか、段位を持っているなどを述べてはいかがでしょうか?Japanese danceは日舞?スポーツ? >There are two reasons why I wants to work 日本人学校. →I wants 一人称なのでwantにsは不要です >First,It is because I was moved by the figure of the teacher who works overseas. →海外で働く先生の姿ということをおっしゃりたいのでしょうか?ちょっと漠然としているように思うので、たとえば(ニュース、番組、本など)で海外で働く先生のことを見聞きして、自分もそうなりたいと思ったなど >Second、I wants to become the power of the children who are living abroad. →wantは上に書いたとおりです。海外に住む子どもたちの力になりたいということでしょうか?ちょっとわかりにくいです。力になるということは手助けなどという意味でしょうから、supportあたりが無難でしょうか。 >I do the best for the warm class making with putting the scholastic ability of the children. →I'll do my best ~for以下はクラスを暖かくする?with以下は子どもの学力を引き出す?どちらもちょっとおっしゃりたいことはわかるような気がしますが、英文として成り立っていないように思います。 >I'm always ready to smile, because I believe being happy makes children and other people feel happy, too. →この文がちょっと唐突な感じです。 >I have the experience which worked at the private corporation. →具体的にどういった会社で何をしていたかはいえないのでしょうか?the experience whichは要りません。 >Being at that work,I have learned how important a communication and positive-thinking is very imoprtant. →importantが2回出てきて英文として成り立たなくなっていますね。 >I'd really like to do my best as a professional of the education in Japanease asosiation school. →would like toでは強い意思が見られないので、will あたりでどうでしょう。 これを日本文で考えても、まだご自分の意見がしっかりまとまっていらっしゃらないように感じます。まずは日本語でいいと思うので、志望動機をしっかりとまとめて見られてはいかがでしょうか?十分な回答にはなりませんでしたが、ご検討をお祈りします。

ryuusuke
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丁寧な添削ありがとうございます。日本語の志望動機は以下のようなものです。 ご回答いただけるとうれしいです。 英語にするとどうなるでしょうか?でもこれだと趣味やスポーツが入っていませんが・・・ きっかけは、私が教師を目指した理由にあります。大学卒業前、海外ボランティアに行く機会がありました。すでに民間企業での就職が決まっていましたが、現地で子どもたちと接する教師の姿を見て、「自分もこのように生きていきたい」と思い、通信教育で免許を取得しました。教職4年目の現在まで、私の教育の原点である在外教育の職務につく夢を抱き、自然にそのことの情報に触れたり、実際に訪問したりする中で、日本を離れて生活している子どもたちの力になりたいという夢を抱くようになったことです。

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