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添削をお願いします。 1.問題のいくつかは、学生たちが思っていた以上に難しかった。 Some of questions are more difficult than students had thought. 2.これらの文を正しい順序に並べかえなさい。 Arrange those sentence in the right order. よろしくお願いします。

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1. Some of the questions were harder than students had thought. 2. Arrange those sentences in the correct order. ※口語での表現なら、right order、     文で書くなら、correct orderの方が適切。

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