学校でのサークル登録会と留学プログラムに参加したい
- 昨日、学校で行われたサークル登録会に参加しました。特にラグビー部の勧誘が疲れました。学校の授業が始まりだしたが、こんなに面倒くさいとは思わなかったと感じました。
- また、学校が開催している海外留学プログラムに参加したいと思っています。締切が迫っている小論文の提出もあり、書き方が分からず困っています。
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昨日学校でサークル登録会がありました。 There was the registration session of circle at my scool yesterday. 特にラグビー部の勧誘が疲れました。 Particularly,I was very tired due to invitation of rugby club. 学校の授業が始まりだしたが、こんなに面倒くさいとは思わなかった。 Some classes gradually began,it was a pain than I thought. 話しは変わるが、学校がしている海外留学プログラムに参加したいです。 Aside from this,I want to join Study Abroad Program offered by my school. もうすぐ、締切で小論文を提出しないといけない。 I must pass my shot essay. 小論文の書き方が分からない。 I don`t know how to write it. まぁ、頑張ろう。 Do try my best......
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1. Yesterday was a registration day for clubs at school. 2. Particularly recruiting for the rugby club was tiring. 3. Classes started and they were more painful than I thought. 4. Aside from this, I want to join Study Abroad Program offered by my school. 5. I have to write a short essay before a dealine which is coming up soon. 6. I do not know how to write it.
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