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例文の訳はこれでいいですか?

連続の投稿ですみません。 また質問が出来てしまいました。 The author draws a comparison between East and West Germany and the North-South divide in England その著者は東ドイツと西ドイツを比べて、イングランドを南北に分ける。 と訳してみたのですが、どうにもおかしいような気がします。 添削お願いします。

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回答No.3

追記です。 文法的に言えば The author draws acomparison ですから何の問題もなく 「著者は比較を書いた」 ですね。 何と何の比較? between X and Y ですよね。 (このand は後ろのand です。前のandは西と東のドイツの「と」です) つまりXとY間ですね。 全体では 「著者はXとY間の比較を書いた」ということになりますね。 Xってなーに? 東ドイツ・西ドイツ Yってナーに? 南北に分かれるイングランド ということになります。 between X and Y のandが前のandだと思ってしまうと 訳せなくなります。 Xの中にandがあると気がつくと非常に簡単でしょ。

sakutam39
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ご回答ありがとうございます。 なるほど。 between X and Y  というのを忘れてました。 andが二つの文を分けている、そしてつなげているものだと勘違いしていました。 ありがとうございました。

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回答No.4

問題の文で、draw a comparisonで比較をするという意味なので、その著者は、東西ドイツとイングランドの南北分割とを比較しています。というような意味だと思います。                                                                    以上

sakutam39
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ご回答ありがとうございました。 助かりました^^

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回答No.2

訳すとすれば、 (その著者は「東西ドイツ」と「国内で南北に分かれているイングランド」の比較を描いている。) ですね。 つまり「分けた」という同じことをしたドイツとイングランドとの違いを書いているわけですよ。 たぶんその内容は ドイツは独立国家になっているがイギリスは一つの国の中で分かれている その違いはなーに? あるいはなぜ? ということが書かれているのではありませんかねぇ。 差し出がましいようですが、 こういう訳のばあい、その先にある状況を踏まえた上で訳すと わかりやすいと思います。 訳す際のコツとして、 ドイツとイギリス、分ける、比較、など単語がある。 かたや、わざわざ西、東それぞれのドイツと書いてある こなた、「南-北」イングランドと一つの国のイメージで書いてある。 ははーん、これは分かれているがそれぞれ独立国になったドイツと 一つの国の中で南北に分かれてるイギリスとの比較の話だな・・・ と想像するわけです。 英語は当たり前のことながら日本語ではありません。 わざわざ別の言葉に置き換えなければ あるいは意訳しなければ、 はたまた、意味を汲んであげなければ日本語にならないことがあります。 例えば ワインやジュースをコップに注いでもらっているときに Say when.といわれたなら 直訳すれば「いつ、を言え」ですがその時の状況を踏まえると いつを言え?・・「いつ」って「もういい」っていうことかな? だったら、「いいところで言ってください」だな。 もう注がなくて結構です。と言う時に声をかけてくれ ということなんだ。 となります。 そして、Say when.と言っているのだから もういいときには「When!」といえばいいんだ。 と気がつきます。 日本語として機能するまでにずいぶん意訳しなければなりませんよね。 だから、語学なんてのはニュアンスでわかればいいのです。 内容があっていればそれでいいのです。 大きく意訳してもまったく問題ないのです。 これからはその辺をヒントに訳してみてください。非常に楽になりますよ。

sakutam39
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ありがとうございます。 確かに日本語=英語ではありませんね。 重なる部分もあるとはおもいますが。 汲み取る訓練も必要ですね。 ご回答ありがとうございました。

回答No.1

その著者は東ドイツと西ドイツ、及びイングランドの北側と南側を比較して書いた。

sakutam39
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ありがとうございました!

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