My Favorite Trip to Malaysia
- Good afternoon everyone. In this presentation, I would like to share with you my favorite trip to Malaysia. Join me as I take you on a journey through this beautiful country and discover the incredible experiences it has to offer.
- Malaysia, a country near the equator, is known for its delicious and diverse cuisine, stunning historic buildings, and relaxing spa experiences. Let's explore the reasons why this trip holds a special place in my heart and why I highly recommend it as a travel destination.
- From the mouthwatering Nyonya food to the iconic Twin-Tower and the enchanting trishaw rides in Malacca, Malaysia offers a rich cultural experience that will leave you wanting more. And let's not forget about the rejuvenating spa treatments that will leave you feeling refreshed and pampered. Join me as I share the highlights of my trip and inspire you to embark on your own unforgettable journey to Malaysia.
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今度英語で発表することになったのですが、一応考えたのですが自信が無いので添削をお願いします。 Good afternoon everyone. My name is ○○ and today I am going to talk about my favorite trip. This year I went to Malaysia with my friends. Malaysia is a country near the equator. Everyday the weather is very nice so there was very hot. But I enjoyed this trip and want to go to Malaysia again. I will tell you about three reasons why this was my favorite trip. First, Malaysian food was very delicious. There are many races so we can eat various food such as Indian and Chinese and so on. I was so happy to eat Nyonya food. Nyonya food is mixing Malaysian food and Chinese food. Malaysian food taste mostly spicy but everything was very delicious. Second, Malaysia has many famous historic building. I went to Kuala Lumpur and Malacca. I went to tour the Twin-Tower and the Blue Mosque. Twin-Tower is the third highest around the world. In Malacca, I rode a trishaw. Trishaw is like "Zinrikishya". It looks beautiful and the view of outside is wonderful. Finally, I went to Spa. Malaysia is famous for Spa so Malaysian people often reserve the Spa. To my surprise, there is a bath with a lot of flowers. the massage make me feel very comfortable and happy. In short, this was a great trip. if you think to go to foreign countries, I want you to go to Malaysia. I think you will surely be a wonderful trip. おかしければ文章自体を変えてもらってもかまいません。 添削よろしくお願いします。
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書き換えると別なものになりかねないので構文・文法的な不自然さと誤り、多少の手直しだけにさせてください。手直し部分は大文字で打ち込んでおきますので調整してください： Good afternoon LADIES AND GENTLEMEN. My name is ○○ . TODAY I am going to talk about my favorite trip. This year I went to Malaysia with my friends. Malaysia is a country near the equator. Everyday the weather is very nice THERE AND NATURALLY IT WAS very hot. But I enjoyed this trip and want to go to Malaysia again. I CAN MENTION about three reasons why this was my favorite trip. First, Malaysian food was very delicious. There are many ETHNIC GROUPS, so JUST AS MANY various TYPES OF food such as Indian and Chinese and so on. I was so happy to HAVE HAD A CHANCE TO eat Nyonya food. Nyonya food is A MIX OF Malaysian food and Chinese food. Malaysian food TASTES mostly spicy but everything was very delicious. Second, Malaysia has many famous historic BUILDINGS. I went to Kuala Lumpur and Malacca. I went to tour the Twin-Tower and the Blue Mosque. Twin-Tower is the third highest OF ITS KIND around the world. In Malacca, I rode a trishaw. Trishaw is like "Zinrikishya". It looks beautiful and the EXTERIOR is wonderful. Finally, I went to Spa. Malaysia is famous for Spa so THE Malaysian people often reserve the Spa. To my surprise, there is a bath with a lot of flowers. THE massage make me feel very comfortable and happy. In short, this was a great trip. IF YOU ARE PLANNING TO VISIT foreign countries, I RECOMMEND you to go to Malaysia. I AM SURE you will ENJOY EVERY MINUTE OF YOUR TRIP THERE. THANK YOU FOR SHARING THE TIME WITH ME. ご参考まで。
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一カ所訂正です： THE massage MADE me feel very comfortable and happy.
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