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- スポーツ労働者の国際的な移動に関する過去の研究では、給与や奨学金などの富を目指すさまざまなスポーツのアスリートの国際的な移動の事例が紹介されています。
- スポーツ労働者の移動は、資本とアスリートの移動に関連して、先進国から開発途上国へのスポーツの「コア」から「周辺」への拡大が浮かび上がってきました。
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以下の文がアカデミックライティングに即して正しいかどなたか添削してください。つたない英文すみません。 The past sports labor migration studies put the cases of international movements of the athletes of various sports aiming at wealth like salaries or scholarships (Bale and Maguire ed., 1994). Expansion of sports from the advanced countries as “core” to the developing countries as “periphery” related to capital and the movement of athletes to the opposite direction comes to the surface here (Magee and Sugden, 2002). In this context, the key factor of sport labor migration often assumed to be the economical one (Maguire and Stead, 1998; Chiba, 2004). In the Migration Studies, however, it is already said that it isn’t enough understanding that international movements of labors arise from simple factor such as acquisition of wealth. The reasons of international flow of people are mixed factors which economic, historic and cultural ties and transformations of social structures of both sending countries and accepting countries were cross-wired (Sassen,1988; Castles and Miller,1993). Sport Labor Migration is transforming its figure in accelerated progress of globalization. The past studies of sport labor migration about soccer (Maguire and Pearton, 2000), rugby football (Chiba and Jackson, 2006) or baseball (Takahashi and Horne, 2006) points out their various factors. Maguire (1996) analyzes movement of ice hockey players and categorizes the sport labor migration into four types; “Pioneers” whose main purpose is the mission of the sport, “Mercenaries” who assume to get money, “Settlers” who settle down in the destination country after retirement, “Nomadic Cosmopolitans” who cross the border with their sport skills, and “Returnees” who identifies their born places as the results of their movements.
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こんにちは。 put the caseが「説明している」「論述している」の意味であれば、explain でいいと思います。 Studies of sports labor migration in the past explains international movements of the athletes of various sports aiming at wealth including salaries or scholarships (Bale and Maguire ed., 1994). Expansion of sports from the advanced countries as the “core” to the developing countries as the “periphery” related to the opposite direction of capital and the movement of athletes comes to the surface here (Magee and Sugden, 2002). In the Migration Studies, however, it has already been said that international labor movements can not be apprehended with a simple factor that acquisition of wealth causes international flow of labor from poor to rich countries.
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こんにちは。こちらにもお邪魔しました。 Studies of sports labor migration in the past put the cases of international movements of the athletes of various sports aiming at wealth including salaries or scholarships (Bale and Maguire ed., 1994). put the case はどのような意味で使ったのでしょうか。 Expansion of sports from the advanced countries as “core” to the developing countries as “periphery” related to capital and the movement of athletes to the opposite direction comes to the surface here (Magee and Sugden, 2002). comes to the surface here のhere というのが気になりますが・・・。 In this context, the key factor of sport labor migration often is assumed to be the economical one (Maguire and Stead, 1998; Chiba, 2004). In the Migration Studies, however, it has already been said that there is not enough understanding that international movements of labors arise from simple factor such as acquisition of wealth. → これだと国際労働力移動が富を得ることというシンプルな要因からなっている、という理解が足りないということになってしまいますが、言わんとしていることはこれとは違うような気がしますが・・・。 International flows of people have mixed factors which economic, historic and cultural ties and transformations of social structures of both sending countries and accepting countries were cross-wired (Sassen,1988; Castles and Miller,1993). Sports Labor Migration is transforming its figure in accelerated progress of globalization. The past studies of sports labor migration focus on soccer (Maguire and Pearton, 2000), rugby football (Chiba and Jackson, 2006) or baseball (Takahashi and Horne, 2006), and various factors are pointed out in the studies. Maguire (1996) analyzes the movement of ice hockey players and categorizes the sport labor migration into four types; “Pioneers” whose main purpose is the mission of the sport, “Mercenaries” who assume to get money, “Settlers” who settle down in the destination country after retirement, “Nomadic Cosmopolitans” who cross the border with their sport skills, and “Returnees” who identifies their born places as the results of their movements.
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put the caseは「説明している」「論述している」の意味で用いました。 comes to the surface hereは、 「ここで（その前の文のStudies of sports labor migration in the past）浮かび上がる」の意味で用いました。 In the Migration Studies, however, it has already been said that there is not enough understanding that international movements of labors arise from simple factor such as acquisition of wealth. 「しかし、移民研究の分野ではすでに、貧困な地域から富裕な地域への富の獲得を目指した労働力の国際移動という単純な図式では、グローバルな人の流れは捉えきれないとされている。」の英訳のつもりで書きました。 つたない文ですみません。ご教唆いただければ幸いです。
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