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ぎこちない英文ですみませんが・・。疑問点があります。
GUNterの回答
わたしが感じたことを、みなさん触れられていないことに限って書いてみますね。 １．４行目：called → such as、"24"と"Prisonの間の and をトル。 ２．５行目：これを訳すと、「頻繁に旅行に行くこと」が好き、となり、 あたかも「ある一定期間のうちに集中的に、何度も旅行をすること」が好き、 なのかと思えてしまう。 ３．６行目：another は an を含んでいますので、その後には単数がきます。 in another words → in other words は典型的な間違いのようです。 ４．６行目：tour's → tour とする。tour-plans とハイフンを用いてもよいでしょう。 ５．７行目：instead が示す代替関係が不明確ですね、もちろんなんとなく、なら 意味はわかりますが。 文章の流れを考えますと、ここは so をはさんでおいて、文末になんとなく instead （あるいは instead of it）を置けばいいでしょう。 ６．７行目： culture には何か修飾語が欲しいですね。一体なんの「文化」のことを 書いているのか、あまりにも茫洋としてしまっています。 ７．７行目： a lot of → enough ８．８行目： a lot of sports → sports ９．８行目：「なによりもスポーツが好き」、というそれだけを提示するのはマズイ んじゃないでしょうか。読者を裏切るような感じがします。あれっ？じゃあ今までの 議論は何だったの？という印象です。 ですので、 But 等の接続詞を使ってよりスムースな流れを確保すべきでしょう。 例1 : But finally, above all, I think that playing sports is my best hobby. 例2 : But to tell the truth, I like to play sports better than anything else. いずれにせよ、文章の流れからすると、最後の段落は少々あっけないですよね。 もう少し分量、肉付けが必要でしょうね。 …と、このあたりですが、いかがでしょう？
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やっぱり英語は難しいです。 勉強不足の面もありますが、やはり指摘されて気がつくことが多いです。（レベルが低いということですが・・。） 後、読み手からの気持ちも書いてあり、いろいろ文書の書き方という面でも参考になりました。 ありがとうございます。