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Hi I am going to introduce Hotel to you（私は貴方にホテルを紹介します。 I have ever been to hotel once（私はホテルへ行った事が一度あります。 ここまではホテルの部分のみ自分で、決めてほかの部分は先生が決めてある感じです ホテルの所はほかの固有名詞が入りますが、伏せておきたいので「hotel」と書きます。 固有名詞が入ってると考えていた抱いておｋです I went there when the scool excursion.（あってるか微妙・・・ There are many foods to eat（ここは平気そうです For example a salad fruits and so on.（ここもまぁ平気かな I stayed at there two days and I enjyoed myself So. I learnd that it was important to help and get along with each other then （長すぎて,接続詞があってるか分からない If you have a chance you had better stay there（ここもどうだか・・・ Thank you とまぁ、こんな感じです。 レベルの高いのを使っているので、ミスはたくさんあるかもしれないです。 自然な流れにできるところはしてください、冠詞のミスとかもないかチェックをお願いします。 宜しくお願いします。
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＞I have ever been to hotel once I have been to Hotel once.（everはいらないです。） ＞I went there when the scool excursion. この文章で何が言いたいのか。。。修学旅行ですか？ 修学旅行なら I went there on a school trip. としてもいいと思います。 ＞For example a salad fruits and so on. For example, there are some salad fruits and so on. 「so on」を使うならサラダフルーツ以外にもう一つくらい 例がほしいところです。 ＞I stayed at there two days and I enjyoed myself So. I learnd that it was important to help and get along with each other then I stayed there for two days and enjoyed it. atは必要ないです。期間を示しますから「for ~」が必要。 滞在を楽しんだのならば単純にitにしてしまっても良いと思います。 I have learned that it is important to help and get along with each other. 学んだことを完了形にして、important「だった」のではなく、important「だ」ということを学んだのなら「was」ではなく「is」になります。thenもあまり必要ないです。 とまぁ適当に私も訳してみただけですが、 参考にしてみてください。
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I have ever been to... は I have been to...なんだそうです。 areが混ざっているのですが、過去の話でしたら were では。 人に勧めるには had better でなく should などのほうが良いとされています。 （ここを注意しないのは学校英語の悪い部分だと思う） You should try it. とか。 http://eow.alc.co.jp/you%20should%20try/UTF-8/ I recommend... もいいのでは。 http://eow.alc.co.jp/I%20recommend/UTF-8/
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『If you have a chance, you had better stay there』の部分に関してですが、 『had better do』はかなり強い言い方になります。 『～したほうがいい』と習うようですが、 実際は『そうしないと大変なことになるよ』という意味も 含んでいるようです。単に提案する意味なら 『might want to stay there』という言い方もあります。 ご参考までに。
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