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4せつめの文です。中三の無い知識を絞って訳しました。間違ってる所、アドバイスお願いします! Because the environment to be ablr to live even if not going out is equipped. Parents might have the cause. The parents love is poured into child too much and it becomes arrogant. High priced goods are bought one after another being pestered. It lives by the remittance when growing up. Parents cannot live through all eternity. 原文:なぜなら、外に出なくても何もかもできる環境がそろっているからです。親にも原因がある。自分の子供に愛情を注ぎすぎ、傲慢になり、高価なものを次々買わされる。大人になると仕送りを送らせて生活をする。親もいつまでも生きていないのに、それがもし途絶えたとき、子はどうなるか。
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