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まずおかしいのは、ピリオドのあとのスペースがない箇所が多いことです。 また「In my opinionは」不要。どう思うか、の質問ですから、あなたの意見に決まっています。 cell phone wasのwasはisですね。 「Take an example.」って意味不明。 「whereever we are」は「everywhere」ではだめなの？ 「we need not」は「We・・・」ですね。 「In addition to」の次にitが必要です。 「we can contact someone I want to talk whereever the person is.」は「we can contact everybody I want to talk with althogh we don't know their whereabouts.」でどうですか。 「But contrary to their good sides」の「their」はだめでしょう。これまで「cell phone」は単数で取り扱ってますからね。「It has these merits, while・・・」はいかがでしょう。 「we have bad sides, too.」は主語が明らかに間違い。絶対ダメ。「it has faults.」でいかが？ 「calling on」は訪ねるの意味ですから、電車やバスを訪ねている人を見る、という意味になります。「using it in a train or bus.」でいかがでしょう。 また、電話はたいていの場合に突然なりますから「And we often catch a phone at midnight suddenly.」は「And we often surprise at phone-call at midnight.」はいかがですか。 「It is very rode・・・」のセンテンスって何を言いたいの？ 「rode」もわからないし、「they think・・・」の「they」って誰のこと？
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