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My mother always complained about me, though I didn't do bad things at all. I think this only discouraged me. My American mother, however, always praised me. This encouraged me. If I had lived in America ever since I was born, my life would have changed entirely. 深刻な感じになってしまったかもしれない下手くそな英文ですが。 chuchukuさんの英文について、第二文目の動詞がないのと、第三文目の"be動詞＋do"になってる(多分文法ミス）のと、第二文目では"this"なのに、第五文目では"that"になってる（整合性がない？）のと、最終文の仮定法の使い方が気になりました。加えて「アメリカ人の母」の意味内容がわかりません。「二人の母」が存在する理由を関係代名詞の非制限用法で修飾した方が良いようにも思えます。 もしかすると全く見当はずれなことを書いているようにも思えます(私も勉強中ですので)。 もし私の指摘した点や英文に疑問がありましたら、補足要求してくださいまし。
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