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何を言いたいのかわからない文章がありますので、一文一文について、何を言いたいのか日本語で書いた方が的確な回答がもらえると思います。
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<（_ _*）>いつもお世話になり、ありがとうございます。英文の添削、よろしくお願いします。 授業の前には、次の授業では何を話そうか、予習しなくちゃ！と思うのだけれど、無理に英文を詰め込んでも自分の実力はすぐ見抜かれてしまうだろう。 だから自分の実力のままでいいや。と思ってしまう。 I always feel that I should think about what to talk in next class and that I should study beforhand but on the other hand I also think that it is no use forcing myself to put things in my head since the teacher will notice it. Before taking lessons, I feel that I need a topic in the lesson and I have to prepare for the lesson. But I end up in thinking that it is no use in cramming English sentences into my head and that I would go with my current English ability.
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In the present, Reichard's lied tends to consider that before Schubert's lied as a whole, it is necessary to figure out the process of the birth of "Kunstlied" to disclose the idea of the lied that he was in pursuit of that. 「現在でこそ、ライヒャルトのリートはシューベルト以前のリートとして一括されてしまいがちではあるが、彼が求めた新しいリート理念を紐解いていくことは、「芸術リート」誕生のプロセスを解き明かすためには必須のことである。」 ＊こちらの英文を添削して欲しいです。 よろしくお願いします。
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教えていただけると助かります。よろしくお願いします。 ここに来れたことは、私の”英語の勉強して良かったと思うことベスト3”に入ります。 One of the top 3 happiest things that was brought to me through my study of English is able to come here. 旅から帰って、普段の生活に戻るのにもうしばらく時間がかかりそう。私の頭の中はアメリカの旅で一杯です。 I returned home. It may take a little more time to get myself a routine. My mind is just filled up with my travel in America. インドのバンガロールは日本でいうところの軽井沢みたいな感じ、別荘を持って休暇を過ごす所だと私は思っています。 I think Bangalore, India is a place like Kruizawa of Japan where many people have a second house and stay during vacation.
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自分で余暇の過ごしかたについての英文を作成してみましのたで、長文で面倒くさいかもしれませんが、英語に詳しい方がいらっしゃいましたら添削をお願い致します。 英文で変な部分がございましたら、バシバシご指摘下さい。 My favorite leisure is to spend with my wife. My leisure I spend with my wife change weather. When it’s fine, we make it a rule to go out sometimes. Since it is very tired with daily work, I would like to bask in sunlight and to reduce stress. There is the park that dog can enter in neighborhood. We have a toy poodle and go for a walk in the park with my dog. We spend to play to throw a ball with dog and play catch and eat a picnic lunch that my wife cooks early morning. If We become very sleepy, We can take a snap on the blanket or a park bench. Also, When it rains, as we can’t go out, we spend to watch movie on DVD. Because both me and my wife like American culture, we always watch Western movie. When we watch Western movie, we always watch not due into Japanese but English conversation with English title. Consequently, We can learn English with watching Western movie. In this way, I spend with my wife at leisure. Because I can spend the special loved woman, I’m soothed the soul at leisure.
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（こんにちはアルファさん） （突然の連絡失礼します） （私は貴社の製品のユーザーで日本に住んでいます） （貴社のウェブカタログの英語版にどのようなものが載っているのか拝見していたら、Ｂという記事が書かれており大変気分転換になった。） （そのような指摘の記事が見れるのはよいと思う） （Ｂという記事に書かれている方法が有名だということをはじめて知った） （私はウェブカタログというものが、このような知識を思いがけず得ることができる上で有用だと思う） (英語は母国語じゃないのでどうか、文法に誤りがあったり文章が変であってもお許しください。） という意味で書いたのですが、お願いします。