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読ませていただきました。 いいスピーチだと思います。親に対する尊敬と感謝の気持ちはとてもよく伝わります。文法的に細かいミスとかはありますが、口でしゃべるプレゼンならそれはあまり関係ないでしょう。このままで十分通じると思います。 私の経験から、外国人の前でプレゼンをする場合は細かい文法や内容の正確さよりも、アイコンタクトとか、伝えようとする姿勢が一番評価されると思います。欧米の感覚からすると、全部覚えて見ないでしゃべるのが理想ですが、そこまでしなくても、ときどき紙から顔を上げて「棒読みしてない」ことをアピールするだけでもすごくポイントが上がると思います。特にあいさつのところとか、最後の３行ぐらいとか、工夫してみてはどうでしょうか
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