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日本語→「顔を上げることによって、私が伝えたい言葉(内容)を観客に簡単にわかってもらえると思う。俯いて話してても観客には届かない、ということです。」 英語→「I think that the words that I want to say can more easy to understand for my audience by raising my face. It means that it is not conveyed to the audience even if I look down and talk.」 こちらの英文が正しいか(文法的に)見て欲しいです。よろしくお願いします。


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>日本語→「顔を上げることによって、私が伝えたい言葉(内容)を観客に簡単にわかってもらえると思う。俯いて話してても観客には届かない、ということです。」 >英語→「I think that the words that I want to say can more easy to understand for my audience by raising my face. It means that it is not conveyed to the audience even if I look down and talk.」 ⇒以下のとおり、語句と添削文をお答えします。 「語句」では、(原文を基本にしつつも)英語にしやすい日本語表現に置き換えてから、対応する英語を考えてみます。それで「添削文」には、その英訳の対象とした日本語も添えておきます。 (語句) *顔を上げることによって⇒彼らの方を向いて話をすれば:if I speak facing them。 *私が伝えたい言葉(内容)⇒話の内容:the contents of the talk。 *観客に簡単にわかってもらえる→よりよく観客に伝わるだろう:will be better conveyed to the audience。 *俯いて話してても⇒表情のないスピーチは:the speech without expression。 *観客には届かない⇒観客にとって理解しにくい:(is) difficult for the audience to understand。 (添削文) ⇒In the speech, I think that the contents of the talk will be better conveyed to the audience if I speak facing them. It means that the speech without expression is difficult for the audience to understand. 《スピーチでは、観客の方を向いて話せば、話の内容がよりよく彼らに伝わると思います。表情が見えないスピーチは、観客にとって理解がしにくい、ということです。》



なるほど、そのような転換が必要なんですね。(=俯いて話してても⇒表情のないスピーチは:the speech without expression) 詳しくご説明いただき大変参考になりました。 ご回答ありがとうございます。


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