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添削してください! テーマ:タイムマシンでどこに行き何をしたいか I would go back to the time when I was in elementary school and master various things. One reason is that a talent is important:it would enable me to express my personality more easily. Another reason is that I could have special experiences in many ways:It would make my life more enjoyable.

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I would like to go back to the time when I was in elementary school and master various things. One of the reasons is that I realized a talent was important because it could help me to express my personality more easily. Another reason is that I could have special experiences in many ways. It could also make my life more enjoyable.

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