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>I think my academic strength is perseverance and creativity. これですと「私の学力的な強みは忍耐力と想像力です」になってしまいます。少し違和感がありますよね。これを「私の性格的な強みは我慢強さと想像力にあります。」としたらどうでしょう。そうすると、こうなります。 I think my characteristic strength lies in perseverance and creativity. >Because, I was in junior high school, I was a membar of valleyball club. It was hard club because it hardly a day off and over half member gave up. but I finished a club activity. このままですと「なぜなら、私は中学校にいました、私はバレーボールクラブの部員でした。このクラブはハードでした。なぜなら殆ど休みの日はなく、半数以上の部員が辞めていきました。しかし私は部活を最後まで続けました。」となります。大体良いと思いますが、改善できるところはあると思います。例えばこんなふうに。 When I was in junior high school, I played for the Volleyball Club. It was a hard club because it hardly had a day off, and as a result, more than a half of the members left the club half way through. However, I stayed till the end. >And, when I was in high school, I was a member of theatrical club. Then I made a drama, so I think I have perseverance and creativity. こののままですと「そして、私は高校時代、演劇部のメンバーでした。そして私は作品を創りました。ですので私は忍耐力と想像力を持っていると思います。」 さて、"I made a drama" とは演劇の脚本を書いたということでしょうか？こうしてみてはどうでしょう。 Also, when I was in high school, I joined the Theatre Club. There I wrote a drama. I think the above two experiences show that my strength lies in perseverance and creativity. ================================================= I think my characteristic strength lies in perseverance and creativity. When I was in junior high school, I played for the Volleyball Club. It was a hard club because it hardly had a day off, and as a result, more than a half of the members left the club half way through. However, I stayed till the end. Also, when I was in high school, I joined the Theatre Club. There I wrote a drama. I think the above two experiences show that my strength lies in perseverance and creativity.
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