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小説を、くだらないとは思わぬ。おれには、ただ少しまだるっこいだけである。たった一行の真実を言いたいばかりに百頁の雰囲気をこしらえている。

I don't think novels are worthless.
They just seem to me to be a little tedious.
Novelists create an atmosphere of a hundred pages......

回答No.1

Him-hymn · ベストアンサー

I don't think novels are worthless.
They just seem to me to be a little tedious.
Novelists create an atmosphere of a hundred pages only to mention one single line of truth.
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an atmosphere of a hundred pagesがはたして通じるかどうか疑問です。
→Novelists spend a hundred of pages to create a situation in order to mention one single line of truth.ぐらいでどうでしょうか？

以上、ご参考になればと思います。

お礼

ありがとうございます。

an atmosphere of の of は for としたいです。

ところで、作家が自著で核心を述べるところですから、mentionは好ましくないんじゃないですか。

回答No.3

Nebusoku3

I don't think novels are worthless.
They just seem to me tedious.
(Because), it spends more than one hundred pages of different atmospheres to show only one line of truth which the writer really want to express.

ご参考程度にはなりますか？

お礼

ありがとうございます。

回答No.2

marbleshit

I don't think novels are worthless.
They just seem to me slightly tedious.
I think novelists have a tendency to write a hundred unworthy pages to express just one line of what they really want to say.