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はじめてアメリカへ行く人が、はたして自分の英語で分かってもらえるかと不安になるのは当然のことだ。 (1)It is natural to worry whether people in the U.S would understand your English or not when you visit there for the first time. (2)It's natural for peopke who visit America for the first time that they worry if their English would be enough to make understand.

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(1)It is natural for you to worry whether people in the U.S. would understand your English or not when you visit there for the first time. (2)It's natural for people who visit America for the first time that they worry if their English would be enough to make themselves understood. とされるとよいでしょう。

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