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- 海外からの研修生の受入を実施し、その概評を本国にレポートすることになりました。公式文書の場合、主語は“I”なのか“Ｗｅ”が良いのか？ などなど、不慣れな英語で四苦八苦しています。どなたか添削をお願いします。
- Mr. Aは、“C”及び他のシステムに造詣が深く、我々のプログラムにおいて、積極的に議論に参加した。
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>Mr. Aは、“C”及び他のシステムに造詣が深く、我々のプログラムにおいて、積極的に議論に参加した。 >Mr. A has knowledge of “ｃ”and other systems, in our program, taken an active part in the discussion. Mr. A is well experiened of “ｃ”and other systems, and he hasactively contributed the discussion in our program. >彼の提案（問題提起）はプログラムの内容の充実に貢献した。 ２文考えました。どちらの文章が良いでしょうか？ >His suggestions made a contribution to a fulfilling our program. >His problem presentations made a contribution to a fulfilling program.) He did a lot for the contents of the program to be fruitful. >我々に、よい刺激を与えてくれたことに感謝している。 >We are very thankful that the suggestions makes to give new impetus to us. We truly are thank him for his help. >Mr.Bは誠実な方で,熱心にプログラムに参加した。 >Mr. B is a very loyal person, and our program participated with great ardour. Mr. B is very reliable and he has highly prticipated in our program. >“C”及び他のシステムに関する、我々の活動について理解して頂けたと確信している。>We believe that he understand our activity on“C”and other systems. We can now say that he knows our activities very well on “C”and other systems >It was a very short program, but I appreciate that I was sent to sharing of nice time. It might have been too short for the program, but I do appreciate for this oppotunity given to me, thank you very much. 「短いプログラムでしたが、このような機会に恵まれて幸いでした。ありがとうございました。」
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