• ベストアンサー
  • 困ってます

英作文です。

小さい頃から食事のマナーはうるさく言われた。テーブルに肘をついてはいけない。本を読みながら食べてはいけない。すべての行儀のしつけは食事にあったように思う。食事を通した習慣が、日本の良き文化を作ってきた。 I was often told to behave myself during eating in my early years. For example, don't stand your elbow on the table, or don't read a book while you are eating. Any discipline of manners lies, I think, in eating. The conventions through eating have made Japanese good culture. としてみました。 どうでしょう…

共感・応援の気持ちを伝えよう!

  • 英語
  • 回答数1
  • 閲覧数187
  • ありがとう数1

質問者が選んだベストアンサー

  • ベストアンサー
  • 回答No.1

<添>(削+コメント) <When I was small> I was often told to behave myself (during特定期間)<while> eating (in my early years). For example, (don't stand your引用符で独立するか)<I was told not to put my> elbow on the table, (or don't)<and not to> read (a book) while (you are) eating. (Any discipline調教 of manners lies有無, I think, in eating)<I believe all manners begin at table自分に特定しなかったのは後の文につなげるため>. (The conventions行事 through eating)<Such manners at table must> have (madeないものを作ったわけではないので「貢献した」と解釈)<kept our> (Japanese good) culture <always good>. ご参考に

共感・感謝の気持ちを伝えよう!

質問者からのお礼

おお!ありがとうございます! 参考になりました いやーなかなか難しいですね(^^;;

関連するQ&A

  • [>英作文 アドバイスおねがいします!

    ●私たちは、食事をしながらテレビを見るべきではない。  このことについてあなたはどう思うか? ○I don't agree with this opinion.  Because TV makes ours fun.  I always watch TV while eating dinner with my family. こんなかんじで書いてみたのですが、 "Because TV makes ours fun."が特に自信ないです(´・ω・`) アドバイスおねがいします!

  • as I toldについて質問させていただきます

    「私が言った事をなぜ言われた通りにしないの? 」 Why don't you do what I said as I told you.で問題ないでしょうか?この場合as以降はsaidが入っていることで、過去完了にしなけれなならないのか、またWhy didn't you~の場合も過去完了でしょうか? 「Why don't you behave as I've always told you to?」の文で文末でのtooはbehaveだと思うのですが、これは仮に「Why you don't vlean your room as I told you」のにto をつけなければならないのでしょうか?そもそも2はtoが無くても良いのでしょうか? 宜しくお願いします。

  • 英作文の添削をおねがいします

    英作文の添削をお願いします。 テーマ:食の安全について(自分の食生活とみんなが健康的で安全なものを食べるために社会はどうしたらよいか) 錠けン:150字以上 3パラグラフ構成以上 序論・本論・結論が明確であること      Today, the problems of food quality and safety have been in the news more than before. As you know, eating is one of the most important habits in daily life, so I care about what I eat every day. Because I live with my family, my mother or I can cook by her or myself. Thus, I can eat healthy food such as flesh vegetables, fruits, meat and fish. However, if I have to live alone, I should sometimes buy the meal at the convenience store when I am busy and unable to cook. In addition, this is the problem for people who live alone. Although a lot of convenience store stand everywhere in the city, most of meals they sell are not healthy, like high-calorie, salty, or including high levels of chemicals. Eating these foods usually harm their health. I suggest that society should make the convenience stores sell more healthy food if they make sure that we all eat good and healthy food. When they so, even people who live themselves will be able to eat safety and be more healthy.(183words) 本論の展開(自分の食生活から社会全体に結び付ける展開)が思い浮かばず、 無理やり結論にもっていった感じがいなめません。。。 英作文を書くときに軽く構成は書き出すものの、何度も消して書いてを繰り返してしまうのですが、 これをあまりしなくて済むコツなどあれば教えていただきたいです。 よろしくお願いします。

  • 英作文の添削をお願いします。

    『現在夢中になっていること、一生懸命やりたいこと』をテーマの英作です。 私は中学、高校とテニスをしていて、そのことについてを書きました。 自信のないところは和訳を付けておきます。 As you know,I belong to tennis club. I have started regulation tennis(硬式テニス)since I entered the high school. And, when I was a junior high school student, I played soft tennis in the club. I'm so crazy about tennis. This winter, we had many practice games. I found my weak points through them. One of them is about my mind. I tend to be weakhearted in the game.(私はゲーム中、弱気になりがちなのです。) Such time, there is a phrase which I remember.(そんな時、思い出す言葉があります) "Even though you lose the skills, don't lose the spirit."(技術で負けても、精神では負けるな) It is my junior high school teacher's. I want to be good at playing tennis so I'll practice hard keeping this phrase to myself.(私はもっとテニスが上手くなりたいので、この言葉を胸に、一生懸命練習したいです。) 添削お願い致します。

  • 自炊か、外食か。英作文の採点を宜しくお願いします。

    「もし一人暮らしすることになった場合。あなたは普段の食事を自炊するか、それとも外食にするか、幾つかの理由を挙げて50字程度の英語で答えなさい。」 英作文の入試問題です。正直中学ニ年生レベルの英文しか書けませんが、なるべく文法上のミスを無くすことを意識して書きました。 I would make my food by myself. I have three reasons. First, I like cooking. Cooking is very fun, exciting, and tremendous. Second, I do not want to eat foods made by stranger. Probably some poisonous matter is in it. It is not safe. Third, it is reasonable. 採点を宜しくお願いします。

  • 訳がわかりません 日本語にできません・・・

    英語を勉強のため詩を訳しているのですがこれはなんといっているのが訳せませんでした。自分でやってみると、 もし私があなたに私が愛してると話したらそれは....わかりませんでした。君が必要だというとしたら....すみませこれ以上訳せませんでした。教えてくださいおねがいします。 If I told you I love you That doesn't mean that I don't care, And when I tell you I need you, Don't you think that I'll can never be there I'm so tired of the way you turn my words into Deception and lies... Don't misunderstand me when I try to speak my mind I'm only saying what's in my heart.

  • I can't help it if he's in love wit

    I can't help it if he's in love with Brett. But I do think he could behave like a man. Don't you? 訳して下さい

  • 自由英作文「ダイエット」

    ダイエットについての自由英作文の問題です。 私の回答と伝えたい内容を以下に載せたので、間違い・不自然な点などお気づきのことがありましたら、なんでも教えてください。お願いします。 問題 以下のA、Bの発言内容としてふさわしい英語を20~30語で記しなさい。 A: Recently, I've seen several Japanese TV program about people who are trying to lose a lot of weight really quickly. B: I don't really like those kinds of shows. I think they're dangerous, because (回答(1) there is a risk that they would not get enough energy by strict diets. In addition, it's possible for them to gain back the weight because of stresses.) A: I don't agree. I think these shows are important, especially right now, because (回答(2) people, especially in developed countries, tend to eat too much and harm their health, so promoting being healthier is important so as to decrease the waste of food.) 回答(1)について なぜなら厳しい食事制限によって彼らが十分なエネルギーを得られないおそれがあるからです。また、ストレスによってリバウンドする可能性もあります。(28words) 回答(2)について なぜなら、特に先進国の人々は食べ過ぎて、自らの健康を害しがちです。よって、より健康であることを推奨することは食べ物の浪費を減らすためにも重要だと思います。(28words)

  • 英作文の添削をお願いします

    自由英作文の添削をよろしくお願いします。 テーマ:いじめに対するアドバイス 条件 ・150words以上 ・3パラグラフ構成以上 ・序論・本論・結論が明確であること。 These days, the problem of bulling is often picked up on the TV program. Some students choose to kill themselves because they feel that they have no another choice to solve the problem. Other students ceased to go to school and study at home. Still others rely on their parents and their parents speak to child’s teacher or the principal and ask them to tell bully to stop bulling. In my opinion, the best way for being bullied students to solve the problem is just continuing to go to school. Of course, I can understand that their parents worry about child’s safety. However, if parents tell them not to go to school, students never change their thought. In my experience, I did go to school when I was bullied, even though I wanted to quit the school or kill myself. But now, I think it was a good experience for my long life. Since I had been mentally injured a lot, I got my heart strong and when my friends or people related me are in trouble, I can give them more proper advice than other people who had never been bullied. For this reason, even if you feel miserable or feel like killing yourself now, you should go to school. This makes you stronger and some day it will be a good experience for you. (226 words) 結論が短いため主張が弱いとは思うものの、文章展開の仕方や肉付けがうまくできていませんが アドバイスや指摘などいただけるとありがたいです。 宜しくお願いします。

  • ノーダウトのit's my lifeという曲のついてなのですがなんとなく訳せますが意味がよくわかりません

    Funny how I find myself in love with you If I could buy my reasoning I'd pay to lose One half won't do I've asked myself How much do you commit yourself? It's my life Don't you forget? It's my life It never ends Funny how I blind myself I never knew if I was sometimes played upon Afraid to lose I'd tell myself what good you do Convince myself It's my life Don't you forget? It's my life It never ends I've asked myself how much do you commit yourself? It's my life Don't you forget Caught in the crowd It never ends これが歌詞ですが、何が言いたいのかよくわかりません。詳しい人いましたら的確に訳して解説してください