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高校生です。英作文がとても苦手です。 とりあえず自分が考えた解答を書きますが、多分大幅に違うので正しい解答を教えて頂きたいです。 *図書館にいる人の邪魔にならないようにそっと入った。 I slide into the library in order not to disturb people there. *人が晩婚を選択する理由のひとつは、自由をできるだけ楽しみたいと思っていることだ。 (晩婚=marry late、becauseを使うこと) People marry late, partly because they want to enjoy as much their free time as possible. *ここ数日間であまりにも多くの人に会ったので、その人達の名前をすべて覚えているわけではありません。 Because I met so many people last a few days , I don't remember all their names. *現代人は忙しくて運動する時間がないためか、太った人が多い。 Many people of today are overweight , probably because they are so busy that they don't have a time to do exercise. *私は多くの障害にぶつかったが、友人達のおかげで何とか乗り越えることができた。 I ran into many problems but thanks to my friends , I could get it over somehow.

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[添](削) I [quietly walked](slide) into the library in order not to disturb people there. People marry late, partly because they want to enjoy as much [of] their free time as possible. Because I met so many people [for the] last (a) few days, I don't remember all [of] their names. Many people of today are overweight, probably because they are so busy that they don't have (a) time to do exercise. I ran into many problems[,] but thanks to my friends, I could get [them](it) over somehow. 高校生でこんなにうまいんですか.うまらやしい!

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回答ありがとうございます。 親切に添削して下さり、嬉しいです。 難しい英単語は辞書を引き引き…やっと文をつくった感じなので、 やっぱり英作文は苦手です;; 直して頂けて良かったです^^! ありがとうございました。

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