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質問

The manager requested that all the personnel in the sales department attended the meeting analyzing this year's marketing strategies.

回答No.2

dreamfighter · ベストアンサー

The manager requested that all the personnel in the sales department (should) attend the meeting analyzing this year's marketing strategies.

仮定法現在は時制の一致を受けません。

回答No.3

dreamfighter

＃１さんへ

あっ、確かにそのようにもとれますね。別解ということでしょうね。

あとpersonnelって複数名詞では？sは不要だと思いますよ。

http://ejje.weblio.jp/content/personnel+

回答No.1

marbleshit

The manager requested that all the personnels in the sales department (that were) attended the meeting (should) analyze this year's marketing strategies.