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When I'm free, I usually read books or comics. It's because when I read them, I can feel as if I were in the world of them. For example, when characters fight against enemy in a story, I fight, too. When they feel sad, I feel so. Books and comics take me to various world and they are always exciting and surprising. Also, books and comics tell me many things. When I find that people who have opinions or thoughts which are utterly different from me, they often change my mind. For these reasons, I like reading very much, and it will continue to being the friend of my life. 文法、単語の使い方、文章構成などについて指導お願いします。

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ほぼ完璧に近いと思いました。 変更を加えてみた箇所について、特段ご説明は不要と思いましたので、取り急ぎ添削だけしてみました。 When I'm free, I usually read books or comics. It's because when I read them, I (can) feel as if I were [transferred to their] (in the) world (of them). For example, when characters fight against [their] enemy in a story, I fight(,) too. When they feel sad, I feel [likewise] (so). Books and comics take me to [different] (various) world[s] and they are always exciting and surprising. Also, books and comics tell me many things. When I find that people who have opinions or thoughts[,] which are utterly different from me, they often [provoke] (change) my mind. For these reasons, I like reading [them] very much, and [they](it) will continue to [be] (being the) friends of my life. When I'm free, I usually read books and comics. It's because when I read them, I feel as if I were transferred to their world. For example, when characters fight against their enemy in a story, I fight too. When they feel sad, I feel likewise. Books and comics take me to different worlds and they are always exciting and surprising. Also, books and comics tell me many things. When I find that people who have opinions or thoughts, which are utterly different from me, they often provoke my mind. For these reasons, I like reading them very much, and they will continue to be friends of my life.

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