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英文添削お願いします。
文書が長いので部分的でも結構です。
よろしくお願いします。
She gives you a short tour in my house.
There are 2 bedrooms and a bathroom, a lavatory on the 1st floor.
A place you use is the bathroom and the lavatory.
Here is the lavatory. There is one on the 2nd floor, too.
Here is a light switch. It’s hard to make out a little.
After you use it, pull or push this lever to flush the lavatory with only this paper.
But be careful not to flush anything else,
Here is a bathroom.
We Japanese do not only take the shower, sit in the bathtub.
But only sit in the bathtub, never put a soap into the bathtub.
This lever regulate a temperature of water from shower.
And this lever give you a water.
When you sit a bathtub, if you do not feel a hot in the bathwater, push this button to make it hot.
You have to cover with this panel, before you go out of the bathroom.
There are a living room and a dining room, a lavatory on the 2nd floor.
We have an every meal in this dining room and feel at home in this living room with my family.
This lavatory is same as 1st.
There are 2 bedrooms on the 3rd floor.
One is your room. You’ll have lived here with her.
That’s all.
Do you have any question?

回答No.1

angkolwhat · ベストアンサー

She gives...
(She will show you around in this house.)

There are...
On this first floor there are two bedrooms and one bathroom with a lavatory.

A place...
This is our bathroom and lavatory.

Here is the lavatory.
This is the lavatory.(見れば分かる)

There is...
There is another lavatory on the second floor.

Here is a light...
This is the light switch. (続きは操作にコツが要るのでなければ不要）

After you use it,...
Please don't forget to flush when you leave it.

But be...
Don't put in anything else other than this paper. (Long time ago one of our guests put in a lot of tissue paper and it stopped up and we had to ask the repair charge.)

Here is a...
This is our bathroom.

We Japanese...
This may look strange to you, but we fill in water and enjoy bathing in it.

But only...
But don't use a soap in the tab or wash your body in it. We use this water only to keep our body warm in it. So remember don't pull out the plug when you leave. We don't want to waste it. And if you don't like it, you can use the shower.

This lever...
This lever regulates the temperature of water from the shower.

And this...
And this gives you cold water.

When you sit...
If you feel the water a little cold, push this button and make it hot.

You have to cover...
When you leave this room, please cover the tab with is pannel so that you can keep it mold-free.

There are a living...
On the second floor, there are our living room and the dining room.

We have an...
We are always on this floor so please feel at home in this room. We have meals here together.

This lavatory...
This is another lavotory the same as the one downstairs.

There are...
There are two bedrooms on the third floor.

One is...
You can use this bedroom with her, but please keep it clean yourself. We won't disturb you.

That’s all.
And please let her know everything I explained to you, will you?
Do you have any question?

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