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自然な会話文になるように、添削をお願いします。-4-

Kevin: Hi, John. John: Oh, hi. You back late, huh? K: Yeah, it's just a friend get-together. Got some news. Hey, how about you? You enjoyed a movie or just watching her face? J: No movies. She came in here.〈g〉 K: ... What's the matter with you? It's kind of too fast, don't you think? J: Kevin, you got it all wrong. She was in the living room, wearing Mom's clothes.〈g〉 K: ... I'm getting confused. What's going on? Tell me. J: Okay. It's just that she accidentally spilled coffee on her clothes at a theater, so I asked her to come over to get it cleaned. K: Oh, that figures. Okay. J: Kevin, you don't know the half of it... I mean... It turns out that they haven't actually met yet but... they know each other. K: ... Wait a second... Now I remember that she's been having a part-time job at a coffee shop. I heard that today. So maybe it's just because Mom was a regular customer. Right? J: Close. She was not "regular", but "good enough to remember". K: Which means? J: Mom was the customer who spilled coffee at the coffee shop. And Alice was the waitress who took care of that. K: Oh... So they are now even. Right?〈g〉 J: Yeah, exactly. Mom said Alice was very kind to her... Kevin, I found out she really is a nice girl. K: Okay, good... John, consider yourself very lucky to have such a wonderful date, you know what I mean?〈g〉 J: Okay, okay. Thanks for reminding me of that. I'll buy you big lunch tomorrow. K: You got it! お時間ありましたら、お願いします。

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今晩は、 ご存じかも知れませんが、 http://www.jref.com/forum/forumdisplay.php?f=105 へ行けば、ネイチブの方々に添削してもらえます。 (以上)

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こんにちは。 リンクをご紹介いただき、ありがとうございます。

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宿題を無料で他人にやってもらおうと思っているのですか? >何らかの課題やレポートのテーマを記載し、ご自分の判断や不明点の説明もなく回答や翻訳のみを求める質問は、マナー違反であり課題内容を転載しているものは著作権の侵害となりますため質問削除となります。こういった質問に対し回答する事も規約違反となりますのでご注意をお願いいたします。 と質問内容を書く欄の上のリンクに書いてありますよ。

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これは宿題ではありません。 おぼえた会話表現を使って、自分なりに作った会話文です。 私は真面目に取り組んでいます。

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