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2011年度 埼玉大学 自由英作文 条件・ 成功は勤勉な努力からなし得ることであり、運は関係がない。というテーマの中で、賛成か反対かを述べ具体的な理由を挙げIながら説明しなさい。 I don't agree with this statement . I think what is important in success is hard work and luck. Not to mention , it is eccential point to work hard if there is something you want to achieve , but I think luck is more important. This is because even if you make every effort to attempt something you want to do , it is not always successful due to something unpredicable and so on. I have an experence. I tried to enter a high school when I was junior high school student. I made every effort to pass the entrance examination , however I couldn't succeed in that. At that time I really und erstood the meaning of this word "luck is needed". Thus I think what is important in success is hard work and "luck". (130字) 添削をお願いできる方がいなくて困ってます。どなたかお願いできますでしょうか。文法を中心に添削して下さるとありがたいです。厳しい意見をお願いします。
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大学受験を控えた受験生です。 志望大で自由英作文が課されるので対策をしているのですがなかなかうまく書けません。出題が200語程度なので全体で35分(日本語でメモ10~15分)で書く練習はしているのですが。。。 構成の作っている段階でネタ不足になってしまったり、メモが難しくなってしまい英文として表現する際に手がとまってしまいます。 添削とアドバイス(役に立つ表現や字数稼ぎのポイント、構成の立て方、自分だったらどうゆう内容で書くかなど)をいただけると非常にありがたいです。 問題 良い教師がどのようにあるべきかあなたの意見を200語程度の英文で書きなさい。 I think that a good teacher has to have three points. First of all,It is imporatnt for a good teacher to be friendly to his students.Of course,he should sometimes scold them when they make mistakes or play a trick too far.However,If student think their is so obstinate or stern that they won't speak to him,he can't understand what his students think and worry about. socondly,It is also important not to give answers ofsome questions to his students quickly.In my experiences,my teacher who I think is the best teacher didn't give me asolution of my trouble.However,he gave me a hint,and he have me think more seriously.So he teach me how important to solve the troubles by myself. Thirdly,he should improve his teaching skills.For example,It is important to think how to teach a difficult question to his students understandably,to consult with senior teacher about his students or class.If the teaching skills of the teacher is improve,his students can learn interestingly. So teachers should have above three points to be a good teacher.
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条件・ 日本の次の首相は女性がなるべきだ。 I do not agree with this statement that a women should be chosen as the next prime minister of Japan. I have two reasons why I think so. First, I think that women are generally inferior to men concerning physical. Needless to say, work of the prime minister is very hard, so I think that it is hard for women to work as the prime minister. Second, it is too much to say that women should work at home. These days, the birth rate is lower and lower. I think that the reason why this problem happens is that men are worried about their child because women also work outside. Overall, what is important is that women should work at home rather than work outside. (128字)
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一橋大学 自由英作文 添削のお願い 2007年度 (120~150語) 条件・ 日本においてクリスマスを祝うべきではない。について述べなさい。 I do not agree with the statement that christmas should not be celebrated in Japan. Many people, for example, a family, a couple and so on, are looking forward to this special day every year, but I think that this day is more important for children in Japan. They are looking forward to receving a present from "Santasan" which is called in japan. ( I'm sorry it's too much for me to write his name exactly.) Needless to say, the "Santasan" is thier parents, but children don't know the fact. I have an experience that I was given a present from him. If there were no christmas, I think that children would be sad and cry. Thus, I think that this day is very important for many people, especially children, and what is important is how you consider them seriously. (139語) 文法面を中心に、ご指摘いただきたいと思います。よろしくお願いいたします。
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埼玉大学の2010年度の問題です。 条件・ 街中等でもし困っている外国人に出会った場合、あなたは、そのひとを助けますか、助けませんか。自分の意見を状況を踏まえつつ述べなさい。 (120~150字以内) I like foreign countries and want to go various countries , but my English skill is not so a good , so I'm worried about talking to foreigners in English.. Thus, foreigners also have a problem in japan., so if I find foreigners who seem to have some troubles , I'm willing to help them . This is because if someone helps me when I have a problem in foreign countries , I will be very happy . I have an experience . When I waited a train for arriving in the station , I was spokened by a foreigner who seemed to have some trouble. He asked me " Which train would go to Tokyo station?" I ansewered the question and he seemed to be happy. thus , I think that helping each other is very important thing and I con tinue to do that when I come across such foreignes. 今年センター試験を受けた者です。添削をお願いできる状況にないのですが、どなたか何かお気づきな点だけでも良いので評価をお願いします。また、初投稿なので見苦しいかとも思いますが何とそお願いします。(127字)
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自由英作文のお願い 条件・日本において成人は18歳からにすべきだ。 I do not agree with this statement that the age of adulthood in Japan should be 18, as in many other countries. I have a reason why I think so. I think that it is too young for teenager to have many responsibilities as an adult and teenager should learn varyous things. Needless to say, as they grow older, they need to have more responsibilities as an adult, so i think that this would make it possible for them to concentrate on studying. It may be too much to say that the longer you learn, the more you will be a good person. Thus, what is important is that teenager should concentrate on studying and hoe we consider them seriously.
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一橋大学 自由英作文 添削のお願い 2007年度 (120語~150語) 条件・ 日本は九月から学校を始業するべきだ。について述べなさい。 I agree the statement that the school in Japan should start in September. I have two reasons why I think so. First, these days, the world is getting smaller and smaller and I think that it is important for us to look around the world. For example, America has introduced this system for a long time. Considering an increace of people who are American and want to study in Japan, we have to introduce this system quickly. Second, it gose without saying that September is in a fall in Japan and the temperature is a little colder than a spring, so we can concentrate on studying. Thus, I agree that the school year in Japan should start in September and I think what is important is how we make use of this system. (133語) 文法面を中心に添削をお願いいたします。宜しくお願いします。
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一橋大学 自由英作文 添削のお願い (120字~150字) 条件・ 日本は民主主義国家ではない。 I do not agree with this statement. I think the meaning of this word "democracy" is that a people can live actively in a country. There are many reasons why I think so, but I would like to write here two reasons about it. First, the education system in Japan is so a firm that children and student can study various subjects which will be very convenient in a society. I think that this would make it possible for them to live actively in Japan. Second, people have various rights for living in Japan. Thanks to these rights, people can live in Japan safely, and actively. Thus, I do not agree that Japan is not a democratic country and what is important is how you take an action actively. (127字) 今回は難しかったです。いつも制限時間として20分を設けてやっているのですが、今回はそれを超えてしまいました。また、文章もまとまりがないかなとも思います。文法面を中心に評価をお願いいたします。
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2009年度 埼玉大学 自由英作文(120~150) 条件・ 現在、留学が若い人を中心に人気を集めていますが、もしあなたがある留学の計画に入れる可能性があった場合、あなたは参加しますか?また理由を述べながら明確に答えなさい。 If I had the chance , I would join the program. I have some reasons why I want to join it. First, I have ever not visited foreign countries, so I want to see the sight of foreign countries such as "Statue of Liberty", "Eiffel Tower" and so on. Secondly, I have studied English since I was junior high school student, so I want to know whether or not I have an ability to talk to foreigners well. By the way, the current world is getting widely and it is more important than before for us to aquire English skills to live in this global world. I have dreamed of becoming a great translater. If I joined the proglam, I would gain big interest for my life from that. Thus If I had the chance, I would be willing to join the program. (143字)
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