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明日高校のオーラルの時間でスピーチを発表するのですが自分の文章が文法や表現が大丈夫なのか心配なので確認をしていただきたいです。お願いします。スピーチの題は「私の大切なもの」です。 My important thing is 2002 FIFA Would Cup memorial medal. This medal was sold in South Korea. It was myfriend gave me. My friend lived in Utsunomiya but he transfened to another school in South Korea four years ago. I sent to Fukube and shogi because I gave it. I could deepen my friendship with my friend ever after. 以上です。英文が長くてすみませんでした。

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回答No.1

One of my valuable things is this 2002 FIFA Would Cup memorial medal. A friend bought the medal in South Korea, and gave it to me. My friend was living in Utsunomiya, and he moved to Soiuth Korea four years ago. He now goes to school in Korea. >I sent to Fukube and shogi because I gave it. 　意味がわかりません。日本語では、何と言いたいのですか？ I cemented friendship with him ever since then.

diplomat
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お礼

早速の回答ありがとうございます。意味不明だったであろう文をここまで修正していただきありがとうございました。

diplomat
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補足

すみません。そこの部分は「私はメダルをもらったので、お返しにふくべと将棋を贈りました。」としたいです。

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回答No.2

＞I sent to Fukube and shogi because I gave it. この部分を I gave him Fukube and shogi in return (for the medal). に変えたらいいのではないでしょうか。

diplomat
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ありがとうございました。参考になります。

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